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Artemis Rose Archer's avatar

I received your river of words thank you… beautiful, epic and heartfelt!

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Kelly Flanagan's avatar

"Learning to Trust Unconditionally / Even when being human feels so uncomfortable to me." I love so much of your poem, but this line jumped out at me. Most human beings are seeking freedom from discomfort. Here you're suggesting their is freedom in discomfort. It's a deep truth. The deeper the truth, the fewer who are ready for it. The further someone goes into their soul, the fewer who will recognize the terrain. The more soulful your writing, the fewer who will comprehend it. This is why reader reactions is a dangerous metric: it will keep us on the surface of things, where most people prefer to stay. I hope that helps a little. 😊

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